Some weeks ago some of the students of the Siguatepeque Bilingual School went to an a exciting trip to Roatan some of the people that went there were Lilian and Nelsy. They were so xcited to go that they not even sleep, but they neither had time to it cuz they had to lived from the scholl at 2:30 am. but all that was for a good reason. They like the trip from the biginning through the end, from going in the ferry to having to wait for a bus in El Progreso. Lilian has told us that: " It as an exciting thing going overthere, but its not a good idea to go to see the "wrost" iguanas (she doesnt like them apparently) wearing a dress". Nelsy says that she likes almst everything: "kanopy, the glass bottom boat, turtles, and others, and that she like spending a great time with her friends". The bad thing was that while they were having fun overthere we the people taht didnt went to Roatan were working really hard to have the points that they will get by going there, But sometimes it as not so bad at all, we steal have a beat of un overhere. The thing is that no matter what we did it was all god and the time was well work.!!! have a great WeekEnd!!!Tamy and Nicole!!
What a great school trip! But did you see an iguana wearing a dress?? I love teaching Spanish in the NC, USA. It looks like your English is coming along well. Spelling can be difficult in every language. God bless you!
ReplyDeleteFirst, I think including the picture of Lilian and Nelsy was a good choice since your topic was about their experiences in Roatan. This helps the reader to be able to interact with the details of your article even better! If there was one thing that I would ask you to do, it would be to return to your article and consider whether or not all of the words are spelled correctly. This is difficult, but without proper spelling it creates a lack of professionalism within the article and makes it more difficult for the reader to understand. There are some other grammar issues, such as a lack of punctuation; however, if you'd like more help with these things just come to me and ask.
ReplyDeleteOverall, good work!
Mr. Steve